here it is people^^

PROLOGUE

Tanalan, a strange world that enclosed OPAZ an organization made of elite warriors. the group rose to free the land of their old leader rising the new king. making a deal with the new ruler which's contents were never exposed to the citizens .OPAZ seemed to vanish. the king grew old his wife and him having a son and three daughters, not knowing many of his children had strange fates he died of old age . his wife and son killed during the vampire war , and his oldest daughter left not believing that her brother was dead leaving the rule to the second daughter.in a great power lust she banished her remaining sister. now for over 2000 years this queen has sat on her throne, her serfs all living in fear have always wondered why OPAZ has not arisen to fight back.

CHAPTER 1

shadow rose in the cool air of the morning his stiff back enraged with the new movement. moving toward light and war he looked down at light her dirty blond hair spread out around her
and her white dress vivid on the dark forest earth. he looked at war who was propped up by the male golden griffin, mist. wars raven black hair a strange contrast on her red shirt
shadow turned muttering as he stretched his cold muscles he began to mix labor and magic to begin to break camp.war and light woke soon after he had finished. light dusted off her dress as war rummaged through the pack for food. like most mornings the small group ate cleaned in the icy water then began to travel. mist soon left them to hunt for his meal. they soon stopped to rest shadow basked in the sun when a scream came up through the trees
whats going on light asked
war shrugged drawing her daggers
lets find out shadow smiled

I like^^...and you better write more.


Man I think Im going to start one of these^^

k and yes you should

lol you captured War's personality so well! you better make more!

kk^^ but i have started to make the comic so yeah may be a little while